Nasir Guyton May 23, 2008
Bass School Room 105-7th
Best Picnic I’ve ever
Been on
I would like to start off my introduction by saying that there are many picnic’s I have been to and there are many places that I have been that seemed like a picnic but since I don’t have much time I would like to start with one picnic.
The time when I went on my best picnic I’ve ever been on was when I was at Washington Park. It was so fun being there at Washington Park I also went to the swimming pool where there’s a water slide. There were so many people there at the pool that I made a couple of friends.
The time when I was there was when I was in between the ages of 11and12. And it was the year of 2005/2006 and my mother had always taken me places like to the zoo and more but this time she had taken us to the park.
The people that were all their was me my 5 brothers my sister my mother and her friend who had a snake and he had brought it with him. And while we were at Washington Park we also went into the swimming pool which was a lot of people their.
In conclusion I show how and why my best picnic was my best picnic and I give three paragraphs showing how.
Bass School Room 105-7th
Best Picnic I’ve ever
Been on
I would like to start off my introduction by saying that there are many picnic’s I have been to and there are many places that I have been that seemed like a picnic but since I don’t have much time I would like to start with one picnic.
The time when I went on my best picnic I’ve ever been on was when I was at Washington Park. It was so fun being there at Washington Park I also went to the swimming pool where there’s a water slide. There were so many people there at the pool that I made a couple of friends.
The time when I was there was when I was in between the ages of 11and12. And it was the year of 2005/2006 and my mother had always taken me places like to the zoo and more but this time she had taken us to the park.
The people that were all their was me my 5 brothers my sister my mother and her friend who had a snake and he had brought it with him. And while we were at Washington Park we also went into the swimming pool which was a lot of people their.
In conclusion I show how and why my best picnic was my best picnic and I give three paragraphs showing how.
1 comment:
hey you! we still need to hear how your big performance went! nasir, the multi-talented young star. :)
thinking of you! hope you had the best christmas!
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