Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Nasir Guyton March 15, 2009
Bass School Room 107-8th

Favorite Relative

Oh!’’ Denise I have no money as I had
explained auntie being n the living room just
about to go to the store. I felt as if the sun
had bent down bent down to touch my neck
not being to move from its enormous gaze of
heat soaring past my spine. It was really hot
in the late summer having nothing to do but
smother yourself into a chair.
It’ll just be me you and your cousin Devin
and if need some money then you would just
have to ask me and not catch an attitude. I just
hope you didn’t think that were going to pay
your own way to the arcade fun house. Aw so
were really not just going to the store. I had
been admired with how my auntie had handled
the day with a little excitement seeing as though
she had once been a kid as well and had lots of
fun.
She had always surprise me with something
special but not this time I was onto her. As we
entered are destination, I saw a cascading waterfall
as being described as a tropical rain forest. Bubbles
begined to float from my chest as I had been amazed
with excitement. When I got to the stand to purchase
my ticket I had made up my mind to ride on the roller
coaster for the first time.
Then seeing that it was going to be a long exha-
usted day, I decided to get the same ride for the 4th and
final ride. And as I told my auntie that the wind glider
had been a lot of fun, she decided to join me as well. It
was almost time to go and already I had been having a
wonderful time being with my family. As I enjoyed my
last minute ride on the bumper carts it had been a mouth
watering event seeing that everyone was going into circles
and loops around the surface area.
In conclusion, I learned a valuable lesson that my
aunt is a caring woman helping the needs of everyone
that approaches her in her everyday movements. Whether
it’s the bad, the happy, and the said she puts her hands at
warmth ready to help her family. And in this behavior of
treating me in this responsible matter it has come to me to
treat her the same predicament. And if it’s not the best moment of your life then you can make the most of it to
doing what’s possible to end your day.

1 comment:

babetron said...

hey there! so, we LOVED your song the other night. loved it. also, i should send you a copy of our magazine that we produce (at my new job). maybe you'll be writing for a magazine one day too...!

love,
ty & erin